This love, that love…
My word! What love?
This life, that life…
Wake up! What life?
This want, that want…
I’ll say! What want?
This need, that need,
Good lord! What need?
It’s a joke, this world…
It’s a hole, this mind…
This love in that
That love, and my life
Two loves in a love
Two loves, and my life
This need, I need!
That want, I want!
This life, or that,
I’ll live, I’ll live!
It’s my hole, this world…
It’s my joke, this rhyme…
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15 years ago
3 comments:
if this rhyme is your joke, ur a good joker... :P
nice.. liked the lines "It’s a joke, this world…
It’s a hole, this mind…" .. though, a bit too self-consciously poetry...
on a more serious note, it's good...though it looks lyk the outcome of a confused mind in the first read, u can see it's actually quite sorted out...
n i see ur not goin to give up ur newly acquired style of writing i.e. conveyin everything thru monosyllables separated by commas :P
alryt not mono-, bi-? tri-? won't give u more than that...
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